1.Who is the main character? Tell me about him or her.
2.Tell me about the setting of your story? Where and when does it take place?
3.What is the main plot of your story?
Monday, December 10, 2012
Fiction Story
1.Who is the main character? Tell me about him or her.
2.Tell me about the setting of your story? Where and when does it take place?
3.What is the main plot of your story?
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My main characters name is noah (pronounced as NOHA). Well my character is a boy that is very adventures,courages,and he loves to get himself into trouble. I will post more comments once other people do BY NOAH
Hi mr.B
The main character of my story is John he likes to go on adventures, play video games, play sports, and all sorts of fun stuff and he's a trouble maker sometimes.
The main person is a girl and she sort of has super powers .
Its a scary story
The main plot is when she uses her powers.
sean
Hi mr.B its leah
my main character is a turkey named small fry and you can tell he is small.And he is very scard of thanksgiving.The setting is outside and it is in the woods.He runs away the night before thanksgiving.There are 2 other characters pancake and berch pancake is a bunny and berch is a monkey.Thats all so bye.
see you in class.
Hi Mr.B Berenson
The main character of my book is named Mia. Mia is really smart. Mia is vary nice and try's hard to fix any problem that comes to her. Mia loves animals. The setting of my story takes place at mias house it takes place near christmas tim so there is snow every where outside. The main plot of my story is the main character Mia's dog gets cancer and Mia is devastated because Mia loves animals. Mia was so sad she wonted some alone time so she decided to go for a walk. On her walk she finds this Crystal like thing that had water like liquid inside of it and it had a faded tag on it that had the letter H on it. Mia found the position in front of a old guy who was a scientist so Mia decides to ask the old man about it and what Mia finds out is that the position is really a position to hell her dog.
-Molly Rohrer#19
Hi Mr.B Berenson,
The main character in my book is Claire. Claire is a girl of course, she has sandy colored hair, she is 10 1/2 years old. She lives in York, Maine near the beach, she lives on Crannberrie drive. She loves to play soccer and and she also loves to ski. She also likes alot more sports but those are just two of her favorites. She has a bunny, a dog and six chikens.
My story takes place on Mt.Chocorua at the begging of the summer time. The setting is warm and a little chilly. It's a nice sunny day and Claire and her family are climbing the mountain. There is still some snow and ice on the trail. The main plot of my story is that Claire and her family go for a hike on Mt.Chocorua and, Claire has a big accident and bumps her head on ice and she starts hallucinating and she see's strange things after that. Hope you liked my post.
-Catie Giffen
The book I'm writing is called Apprenticeship, and it has 4 main characters. The first is named Alex Forest, and he is apprenticed to the god of habitat, who's name is Habitat. In my book, the gods are called what they are the god of. any way, Alex Forest was a character developed by my brother Noah.
My next main character was developed by myself. His name is Joseph Reap, and he is apprenticed to Death. He is very gloomy.
Next is Edward Acid. He was also developed by me. He is apprenticed to Alchemy.
after that is someone developed by Logan. His name is Perseus Lead. He is apprenticed to Ore, and Smith. Not many people like him
Last is a character made by my brother Ben. His name is Garku Erudite. He is apprenticed to Thought. He is very chaotic, and smart, and has more agility and strength. He is good, but at the same time, he is evil.
Mostly, my book takes place in York Maine in a fictional place called Apprentice Academy. It takes place in the present day.
The main plot is about Joseph Reap learning about his past, and the apprentices trying to keep apprentices a secret from the rest of the world.
Jakob Eneman
To Molly. I think your comment is really thoughtful. It makes me want to read your book.
Jakob Eneman
Hi Mr.B,
The main character in my book is a girl named Katniss. Katniss is a very good at hunting and is very loving to her sister. I love how when Prim was called for the Hunger Games Katniss volunteered to take her place because she was willing to let herself die but not Prim. Katniss also has a best friend that is a boy, his name is Gale. Katniss was hoping that when she was older and ready to marry someone she wanted to marry Gale but when Peeta got involved in her life everything changed, since Peeta wanted to hold her hand right before they went to the Hunger Games and said she was his ever-loving crush that he had on her for his whole life now they have the new nickname called the "star-crossed lovers." Katniss also has a mocking jay pin that she has and wears for good luck. She gave it to Prim for good luck but all she got at the reaping was bad luck but when Katniss volunteered Prim gave her the pin for good luck at the games. Sorry for the very short blog. I will do another blog later! :)
-Abby Orso
Hey Mr.B its Haleigh
My main character is Cindy she is 13 years old and has a story that every one knows she knows the story but she didn't know she was Cinderella. one day little red riding hood shows up in her kitchen and tells her about her brother and dad that she was told that were killed in a car accident but there fairy tale characters just like her.
The setting of my story is in her house and in a hidden down called fairy tale character forest. The main plot of my story is for her to learn who she really is and so she can find her dad and her brother on a wild adventure to find who she really is and get in to some trouble on the way
- Haleigh O. :) :)
Hey Mr.B its Haleigh
My main character is Cindy she is 13 years old and has a story that every one knows she knows the story but she didn't know she was Cinderella. one day little red riding hood shows up in her kitchen and tells her about her brother and dad that she was told that were killed in a car accident but there fairy tale characters just like her.
The setting of my story is in her house and in a hidden down called fairy tale character forest. The main plot of my story is for her to learn who she really is and so she can find her dad and her brother on a wild adventure to find who she really is and get in to some trouble on the way
- Haleigh O. :) :)
To ABBY well the first thing I wanted to say is that your blog was not short. But I liked the way you wrote it because when you said the thing about katniss and peta But when peta came into Katnisses life everything changed. I really like how you wrote that. Well I have seen the movie but after I read your blog I think that now I might read the book. And once again your blog was not short. FROM NOAH
To ABBY well the first thing I wanted to say is that your blog was not short. But I liked the way you wrote it because when you said the thing about katniss and peta But when peta came into Katnisses life everything changed. I really like how you wrote that. Well I have seen the movie but after I read your blog I think that now I might read the book. And once again your blog was not short. FROM NOAH
To ABBY well the first thing I wanted to say is that your blog was not short. But I liked the way you wrote it because when you said the thing about katniss and peta But when peta came into Katnisses life everything changed. I really like how you wrote that. Well I have seen the movie but after I read your blog I think that now I might read the book. And once again your blog was not short. FROM NOAH
Dear Mr.B,
One of my main characters name is Jade. Jade is 12 years old and the main plot of my book is that when
your family is in danger. You have to protect them. It's scary, but it has a lot of thought.
from
Reilly
Dear Mr.B,
One of my main characters name is Jade. Jade is 12 years old and the main plot of my book is that when
your family is in danger. You have to protect them. It's scary, but it has a lot of thought.
from
Reilly
dear mr.b
so you know jade, but the other main character is jared. it's not jade's family at stake, its jared's. so you know the main plot, but i hope you like the book. thats my blog.
from
reilly
dear mr.b
so you know jade, but the other main character is jared. it's not jade's family at stake, its jared's. so you know the main plot, but i hope you like the book. thats my blog.
from
reilly
Hi Mr.B,
I'm writing about my fictional story called Rebecca and Her New Friends.
1.My main character is Rebecca and she is twelve years old. She is very nice and she loves to go on adventures. She also hates opera because her mom sings it all the time.
2.This story takes place in the woods behind rebecca new hundred year old creepy house.
3.One day Rebecca went in the woods and she passed out she woke up and this man was telling her she was mother nature. With a help of some friends she keeps the earth as good as it can be.
To Haleigh:I love the idea of your story. Your blog really makes me want to read it. Fairy tails are my favorites I love them. Cindy is a good nick name too. I wonder if she runs into a prince.
Caroline
To Caroline
I stil have not made a new character but the idea of the price is a good idea
-Haleigh
Hi Mr.B Berenson
I think that the post that catie did was really good. I liked how she described every thing. i really felt like I was there in her story. I also so liked Abby comment on the hunger games and I also think that hers was really descriptive. I also liked the part she liked when katniss volunteered for prim.
-Molly Rohrer#19
Hi Class,
Most people didn't read what you were supposed to do. You were supposed to write about the character in the story that you are writing. I wrote about Claire which is one of my main characters. I'm now going to write about another maine character which is Hippy M. Hippy M is a mamal. He is a he which I just said. He is chocolate brown and he has hazel eyes. He is visiting his cousin Albert who is also a moose. Hippy M likes to "Borrow" things from hikers when they are not looking, he is very quiet and stealthy so none notices a singal thing missing. Albert thinks that it is funny that Hippy M likes being so funny, but he is disappointed of Hippy m that he has to "Borrow" things from the people that go hiking on Alberts mountain. I won't tell any more because I want it to be a surprise for the class.
Hope you liked my cooool blog.(HIPPY)
-Catie Giffen
To Molly,
I like how you discribed your character and what she likes. I think that it is cool how you like writing about animals. I bet your story will be really good.(They always are) I hope you share your story with me sometime.
-Catie Giffen(your bro)
Hi! Mr. B, Berenson
1. The main characters name in my story is Haleigh. She is 11. She is adventurous and curious.
2. My story takes place in Maine. It is a story about traveling in time, But in the beginning it is 2012.
3. The plot of my story is that Haleigh finds a key that freezes time but there is a book that goes with the key and she wants to find it
-Hannah :D
Hi Mr.B,
In the last blog I didn't finish what I was going to say about the main characters. The last thing I wanted to say was that my favorite part in the Hunger Games trilogy is when Katniss covers Rue in flowers after she dies. I think that that part in the book/movie shows that Katniss is not just a sassy person but that she cares about a lot of people in her life.
Setting:
In this book there is two settings, one in the arena and two district twelve. I think that at the part I'm in in the book the main setting is the arena because they are fighting in the arena in the book for the 76th Hunger Games. Setting also mean qwhen it takes place and my book takes place in the future.
Plot:
The plot in my book is when Peeta and Katniss go back to their homes and try to forget about everything, but really nothing goes as planed in the whole district. Seneca Crane gets killed by President Snow for letting Katniss AND Peeta go home as the winning victors. The Capitol is also getting mad, the Capitol wants revenge! When rumors of a rebellion that has started reaches Katniss, almost everything changes. They have to go to all the districts and make speeches in front of all of them, which is called a Victory Tour. The worst part is that during the tour they have to act like to madly in love teenagers, if the people gathered up for that speech do not believe that they are madly in love the whole district and Peeta and Katniss families could be in REALLY big trouble.
I hope I answered all of the questions I needed to answer! Hope you enjoyed my blog!
-Abby Orso
The main character in my story is a boy that is nine years old. He has a sister that is 6 and a mom and dad. He is very adventouras and likes to take risks. The main part of the story takes place in ther house and in an underground room directly below there house. The story is in past tence. The main part of the story is when the Christmas tree falls over and a hole popens in the hole.
Tyler Rivers
The main characters in my fictional story are Bob and Dexter. Dexter is a robot that was created by Bob the scientist because Bob was very lonely. For a moderate amount of time Dexter was absolutely insane; he was of by one on everything,
Hi Mr.B
The main character doesn't have a specific name like in the witches. She has blonde hair, blue eyes and is shy.She has a little sister named Sasha who is apparently REALLY loud. It takes place in Maine during modern times. The main idea is a magical Christmas tree that falls on people to give them magic powers. In the beginning the main character and her family go to pick out a Christmas tree, and she picks out the magical tree and the next morning it falls on her. she can then fly,and at the north pole, santa doesn't have enough gifts. She then saves the day (or night) and it was all because of the tree.
Jill D.
My main character is my dog that died from cancer and my setting is when my dog was alive.
Connor
I'm currently introducing the person who is going to be the main-main character, and I'm also making the main characters start to meat each other, but I'm still not that far in it.
Jakob
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